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The waves have pushed you ashore,
Cloaking you in the foam of the sea.
I wonder how far you must have swam
And did you choose this place to die?

I will sit here with you for awhile;
Neither of us need be alone.
I will lay on this bed of sand
And taste these last salt sprays with you.

I will stay here, wrapped in weeds
Until the sea claims you again.
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tirasunil Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Not sure what to make of this one...reminds me of mythology again. Excellent as always. :)
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junete Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013
It is both about a sea turtle that I found washed ashore and also a family member who has passed away. I can see why it might remind you of mythology, I've been reading a lot of myths again and sometimes it infiltrates my writings. :)
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tirasunil Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Hmm I can see both of those...
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Is-lnds Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2013
it feels like you took a moment
- even two and froze them.
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junete Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013
It's odd and nice that you write that because this is actually two moments stitched together and I really didn't think anyone would pick up on that. Thank you so much for the comment.
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Is-lnds Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013
thank you for writing this. :heart:
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junete Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013
:heart:
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